Hugmonster The Movie

I think I should start writing the next scene, what do you think?

Do eet!

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:Do eet!

But I need to know who "Not Mitch" is!

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:Do eet!

But I need to know who "Not Mitch" is!

MY NAMES NOT MIIIIIITTTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:Do eet!

But I need to know who "Not Mitch" is!

MY NAMES NOT MIIIIIITTTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

MY NAME IS NOT IAN! BRANDON! SOMETHING!

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:Do eet!

But I need to know who "Not Mitch" is!

MY NAMES NOT MIIIIIITTTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

MY NAME IS NOT IAN! BRANDON! SOMETHING!

OR OTHER!

Eh, I still think the kiwi should have a deep, manly voice. Or something really baritone.

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:Do eet!

But I need to know who "Not Mitch" is!

MY NAMES NOT MIIIIIITTTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

MY NAME IS NOT IAN! BRANDON! SOMETHING!

MY NAME'S.
NOT.
RIIIIIIIIIICK!!

(btw, was my status any different one post ago?)

kaploy9 wrote:Eh, I still think the kiwi should have a deep, manly voice. Or something really baritone.

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:Do eet!

But I need to know who "Not Mitch" is!

MY NAMES NOT MIIIIIITTTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

MY NAME IS NOT IAN! BRANDON! SOMETHING!

MY NAME'S.
NOT.
RIIIIIIIIIICK!!

(btw, was my status any different one post ago?)

LOL!!!

OK, I got a plot twwist: he IS Mitch, but the thing is: He is no longer called Mitch. His name is... FALYU-001. And he's part robot!

YES.

LOL WTF!? YEAH!

OK gonna start it now. Reserved post.

SCENE 16

Susan: I'm sorry, I thought you were someone else. What IS your name?
Splash: Yeah, what IS your name?
Susan: Shut up!
Not Mitch: (turns away) I have been called many things in the past: a hero, a menace, a survivor, a fugitive. But I have two names now: one is prisoner. The other... is FALYU-001.
Susan: Wait... Falyu... Falyunto! Mitch, is that really you?
Not Mitch: (Turns around) I have not heard name called for me in ages. It was so long ago... Susan.
Susan: Mitch! It really is you!
Splash: You know this guy?
Susan: Yeah, I used to go to college with him. I... we used to date.
Splash: Aww, that's sweet. (looks at Mit-- I mean FALYU-001) Emm, was he always half-Grox like that?
Susan: No... hey Mitch--
FALYU-001: I wish not to be called that name.
Susan: Ok, FALYU-001, why are you like that anyways?
FALYU-001: It is quite a story... let's see if I can remember... (pauses, walks around) Oh yes. (Cuts to flash back of him launching off) After the Hug Monsters first came, I escaped into space, hoping to rid myself of these green things... (shows him in space by now) As I went on, I grew tired, cold, hungry. I barely had anything. Then, found some Hugmonster Rebels... (shows him walking on a planet, they walk towards him)
Mitch: Hug Monsters! Get away or I'll shoot!
(a blue Hugmonster approaches him. In the back ground are three other Huggys)
Hugeeo: Calm there, Falyunto. We are here to help you.
(another Hugmonster walks up)
Hugada: You look exhausted, come with us and we'll give you food and shelter.
Mitch: Trusting Hug Monsters? Ha! Why should I go with you?
(Another Hugmonster)
Hugeesha: Because we know what you're running from. You're a Falyunto, why shouldn't you be running?
Mitch: You have a good point... but still, why should I trust you?
(a stranger looking hugmonster walks up)
Hugugug: I think Hugeesha explained it pretty well. You NEED us.
Mitch: OK, fine. But any suprises (pulls out gun, sticks it at hegeeo) heads are gonna roll.
(goes back to jail cell)
FALYU-001: From that day, I stayed with them... until that day...
(goes to Splash Drop, who is stuffing his face with random popcorn)
Splash: So what happened next?
(Susan knocks popcorn over)
FALYU-001: I was captured by the Hugmonsters... they kept me captive while they did experiments on me... and most of all, they made me part robotic.
Splash: Hmm, interesting story.
Susan: Now that that's out of the way though... how are we going to get out of here?

Oh, I have that scene. but you could still write yours

Two scripts? I have the solution:

I recommend the "for teh lulz" setting.

Finished. Time to blend!

By the way, those characters that are other Hugmonsters are omgimonfire's makings.

Here's my scene



Scene 16

(Continuing where scene 14 left off, Susan stares at the Faloyunto)
Susan: I'm sorry I thought you were... someone else...
???: It's alright... My name's Chris
Susan: Mine's Susan
Chris: You're the Susan the guards are always talking about? They said you were a Fibea!
Susan: Well you can clearly see I'm not...
Chris: No
Susan: How'd you get here?
(Chris sighs and the scene goes sepia toned displaying Chris talking to several Faloyuntos back on his home planet Chris narrates as the scene continues)
Chris (narrating): I had just gotten back from the docks, my buddies and I were shooting the breeze while we walked down the street
Chris: So you guys see the size of that girl's ass?
(His buddies shout in agreement)
Susan (Voice-over): What?
Chris (narrating): Um....nothing
(The scene skips back to the start of Chris's line)
Chris: So you guys see the size of that fish I caught?
(His buddies shout in agreement)
Guy 1: Yeah it was the size of your momma's!
(Buddies whoop)
Chris: Alright, Alright...
Guy 2: So you guys going to go see the tests today?
Chris: No, I have to work on the ship
Chris (Narrating): You see I had this old spaceship that I found on the outskirts of the city, In my free time I repaired it
(Scene shows Chris standing in front of a rusty ship holding a wrench)
Chris: Okay, how to do this?
(Hits ship with wrench, the engine sputters and roars to life, black smoke pours from the engine)
Chris: Hey! Nice!
(The music changes dramatically, green ships begin falling flying through the sky one lands near Chris)
Chris: What the-?
(A hatch on the ship opens up, Three Hugmonsters walk out of it)
Chris: What are you?
Hugmonsters: We're your best friends
Chris: (backing away) What do you want with me?
Hugmonster: We just want hugs (Opens arms; to other huggers) Get him
(The Hugmonsters begin to surround him, Chris throws the wrench at one of them, it knocks the Hugmonster out, the two other huggers rush towards Chris. Chris runs behind the spaceship, the two huggers crash into the ship and collapse, Chris rushes inside the ship as another Hugmonster ship lands. Chris begins furiously begins pushing buttons)
Chris: c'mon I just got this thing working
(the ship begins rumbling then takes off the Hugmonsters on the ground shout at him)
Chris: Ha-ha! see ya suckers!
(A very large green ship approaches his, a beam hits Chris's ship and pulls it towards it. Chris looks at the ship through the window)
Chris: Crap
(The scene transfers back to the prison, Susan is watching Chris)
Chris: Turns out that was the Kings private ship, he liked me so he kept me on as his personal servant, and I've been here ever sense
Susan: And what about your eye?
Chris: I tried to escape the first week I was here, King did that so I wouldn't try it again
Susan: Oh...
Chris: The king told me what happened to our planet, I couldn't believe it...
Susan: I know...
(Susan stops, A guard approaches Chris's cell)
Guard: (To Chris) The King requests your assistance, it's another pickle jar
Chris: (Sighs) Be right there
(The guard leads Chris away, Susan watches him leave)
(Scene cuts to nerd in theater)
Nerd: Ooo a love interest

The size of that girls ass! lol

Sounds better than mine. But it should be labeled scene 16.

You can fix that easy though.

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:Starting now, post reserved.

Scene 15

(Starts out showing the wreckage. Float and acid are arguing)
Flower: It's your fault we crashed!
Acid: Mine? PLease, you were the one arguing where to go.
Flower: MINE? You dissolved the map!
Acid: PLease, it's not like we needed it
(grass butts in) Grass: HEy guys, stop arguing! We need to get on with the plot!
Flower: No! Not until I can get my revenge on him! *slaps acid*
Acid: Oh that's it!
(more arguing. Focuses in on Float, who walks under a kiwifruit tree)
Float: Well I might as well hang out with my fellow fruits while I'm here
(picks up a kiwi. It starts talking
Kiwi: Hello young one, what is wrong?
Float: Well, we crashed, and we don't know where we are, and we need help, and our friend is in trouble.
Kiwi: Well, I see. I'll tell you this. But bring me closer to your ear.
Float: OK. (brings to side of head, because, well, they have no visible ears)
Kiwi: Closer. (does so) Closer. (does so) No, here what I have to say. *pause* (screaming) BLAHARGAHARG!!
(Float is startled)
Float: AAAAHAHAHhaHAHahhahHAHAhahAHAhABLaaarg
Kiwi: (laughs) Just kidding. Now, here's what I really have to tell you: There's a city west of here. Before you enter, you'll find a guy who one of your buddies over there knows. He can help you.
Float: Ohh, I see now! Thanks, talking kiwi! (goes over to the group) HEY GUYS!
(Flower looks over from arguing)
Flower: What do YOU want?
Float: I- I- I just talked to a kiwi, and- and- and he told me that there was a city to the west of us! And we'll get help!
Grass: (to Stone) Should we really trust him?
Flame: Well I guess we could... you know what, screw it, let's go.
Grass: (to rest of group) OK, me and Flame are going to follow Float, we'll let you know if we find something.
Acid: You go do that.
(continues arguing with Flower)
(Grass and Flame follow Float through some bushes, a pause)
Grass: (shouting) Hey guys, come here!
(Stone, Helen, Flower, and Acid go through bushes. A city can be seen. A guy can be seen talking to Grass.)
Grass: Yeah, I want you to meet Kurt, he was the Spoffit dealer from my community college, and he says he can help us!
Kurt: By the way, Spoffits are not drugs.
Grass: Thanks for that, Kurt. Now, Kurt says he knows a guy in the city who can fix up our ship for free! What do you say?
Acid: Sure!
Stone: (to Flame, whispering) Uhh, don't you think that that was a bit out of character?
(Cuts to a random rope bridge. It collapses. Everyone screems)
Nerd: OMG!

Does anyone know where he was going with this?

murph04 wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:Starting now, post reserved.

Scene 15

(Starts out showing the wreckage. Float and acid are arguing)
Flower: It's your fault we crashed!
Acid: Mine? PLease, you were the one arguing where to go.
Flower: MINE? You dissolved the map!
Acid: PLease, it's not like we needed it
(grass butts in) Grass: HEy guys, stop arguing! We need to get on with the plot!
Flower: No! Not until I can get my revenge on him! *slaps acid*
Acid: Oh that's it!
(more arguing. Focuses in on Float, who walks under a kiwifruit tree)
Float: Well I might as well hang out with my fellow fruits while I'm here
(picks up a kiwi. It starts talking
Kiwi: Hello young one, what is wrong?
Float: Well, we crashed, and we don't know where we are, and we need help, and our friend is in trouble.
Kiwi: Well, I see. I'll tell you this. But bring me closer to your ear.
Float: OK. (brings to side of head, because, well, they have no visible ears)
Kiwi: Closer. (does so) Closer. (does so) No, here what I have to say. *pause* (screaming) BLAHARGAHARG!!
(Float is startled)
Float: AAAAHAHAHhaHAHahhahHAHAhahAHAhABLaaarg
Kiwi: (laughs) Just kidding. Now, here's what I really have to tell you: There's a city west of here. Before you enter, you'll find a guy who one of your buddies over there knows. He can help you.
Float: Ohh, I see now! Thanks, talking kiwi! (goes over to the group) HEY GUYS!
(Flower looks over from arguing)
Flower: What do YOU want?
Float: I- I- I just talked to a kiwi, and- and- and he told me that there was a city to the west of us! And we'll get help!
Grass: (to Stone) Should we really trust him?
Flame: Well I guess we could... you know what, screw it, let's go.
Grass: (to rest of group) OK, me and Flame are going to follow Float, we'll let you know if we find something.
Acid: You go do that.
(continues arguing with Flower)
(Grass and Flame follow Float through some bushes, a pause)
Grass: (shouting) Hey guys, come here!
(Stone, Helen, Flower, and Acid go through bushes. A city can be seen. A guy can be seen talking to Grass.)
Grass: Yeah, I want you to meet Kurt, he was the Spoffit dealer from my community college, and he says he can help us!
Kurt: By the way, Spoffits are not drugs.
Grass: Thanks for that, Kurt. Now, Kurt says he knows a guy in the city who can fix up our ship for free! What do you say?
Acid: Sure!
Stone: (to Flame, whispering) Uhh, don't you think that that was a bit out of character?
(Cuts to a random rope bridge. It collapses. Everyone screems)
Nerd: OMG!

Does anyone know where he was going with this?

Not exactly. I far as I remember(since I actually rewrote some of the original scene), it was merely something to facilitate a scene change from some sort of dungeon/cave/maze-prison-type-thingy. Float was semi-separated from the rest of the group, and Float originally hallucinated the kiwi.

Also, Grass was with the group when she first spots "Kurt". (he did not have a name before)

From what I remember of what I changed, the kiwi gained a deep voice, Float lamented over the loss of the kiwi when the illusion fades after a fourth-wall reference, and Flame became more sarcastic-ish/genre-savvy.

kaploy9 wrote:

murph04 wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:Starting now, post reserved.

Scene 15

(Starts out showing the wreckage. Float and acid are arguing)
Flower: It's your fault we crashed!
Acid: Mine? PLease, you were the one arguing where to go.
Flower: MINE? You dissolved the map!
Acid: PLease, it's not like we needed it
(grass butts in) Grass: HEy guys, stop arguing! We need to get on with the plot!
Flower: No! Not until I can get my revenge on him! *slaps acid*
Acid: Oh that's it!
(more arguing. Focuses in on Float, who walks under a kiwifruit tree)
Float: Well I might as well hang out with my fellow fruits while I'm here
(picks up a kiwi. It starts talking
Kiwi: Hello young one, what is wrong?
Float: Well, we crashed, and we don't know where we are, and we need help, and our friend is in trouble.
Kiwi: Well, I see. I'll tell you this. But bring me closer to your ear.
Float: OK. (brings to side of head, because, well, they have no visible ears)
Kiwi: Closer. (does so) Closer. (does so) No, here what I have to say. *pause* (screaming) BLAHARGAHARG!!
(Float is startled)
Float: AAAAHAHAHhaHAHahhahHAHAhahAHAhABLaaarg
Kiwi: (laughs) Just kidding. Now, here's what I really have to tell you: There's a city west of here. Before you enter, you'll find a guy who one of your buddies over there knows. He can help you.
Float: Ohh, I see now! Thanks, talking kiwi! (goes over to the group) HEY GUYS!
(Flower looks over from arguing)
Flower: What do YOU want?
Float: I- I- I just talked to a kiwi, and- and- and he told me that there was a city to the west of us! And we'll get help!
Grass: (to Stone) Should we really trust him?
Flame: Well I guess we could... you know what, screw it, let's go.
Grass: (to rest of group) OK, me and Flame are going to follow Float, we'll let you know if we find something.
Acid: You go do that.
(continues arguing with Flower)
(Grass and Flame follow Float through some bushes, a pause)
Grass: (shouting) Hey guys, come here!
(Stone, Helen, Flower, and Acid go through bushes. A city can be seen. A guy can be seen talking to Grass.)
Grass: Yeah, I want you to meet Kurt, he was the Spoffit dealer from my community college, and he says he can help us!
Kurt: By the way, Spoffits are not drugs.
Grass: Thanks for that, Kurt. Now, Kurt says he knows a guy in the city who can fix up our ship for free! What do you say?
Acid: Sure!
Stone: (to Flame, whispering) Uhh, don't you think that that was a bit out of character?
(Cuts to a random rope bridge. It collapses. Everyone screems)
Nerd: OMG!

Does anyone know where he was going with this?

Not exactly. I far as I remember(since I actually rewrote some of the original scene), it was merely something to facilitate a scene change from some sort of dungeon/cave/maze-prison-type-thingy. Float was semi-separated from the rest of the group, and Float originally hallucinated the kiwi.

Also, Grass was with the group when she first spots "Kurt". (he did not have a name before)

From what I remember of what I changed, the kiwi gained a deep voice, Float lamented over the loss of the kiwi when the illusion fades after a fourth-wall reference, and Flame became more sarcastic-ish/genre-savvy.

But it's different now!

Let's start on scene 17.

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:Let's start on scene 17.

Sporum down for you?

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:Let's start on scene 17.

Sporum down for you?

Yush.

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:

RLSForumMasterOmnivex wrote:

RLSForumMasterGand wrote:Let's start on scene 17.

Sporum down for you?

Yush.

second time this week.